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by The People's Republic of Ministry of World Assembly Affairs. . 13 reads.

TCB MoWAA: Vote AGAINST Condemn Lily


The Communist Bloc
Ministry of World Assembly Affairs



Information for Voters
Condemn Lily

Recommendation:

Vote AGAINST


Overview
This resolution aims to condemn the notable and infamous region of Lily for raiding and tagging regions. The problem is that this resolution is as infamous as the region it aims to condemn which was widely derided in the SC Community for poor and awkward writing, inaccuracies and the failure of the author to respond to feedback and improve its draft.

Recommendation
The writing on this resolution is poor and is out-of-place in several places, with awkward phrasing in many parts. The resolution also is monotonous and reads more like a laundry list of so-called tags, which does not really fit Lily's achievements, reputation and contributions to NSGP. It is also full of inaccuracies, such as claiming that the region The Embassy "held over 50 nations" and ignores its role as mainly an RMB chatting place and exaggerates the alliance between Lily and TBH. Morever, the author hasn't really responded well to feedback and failed to improve on their mistakes on their drafts, notably even misspelling the word hereby as "herby" three times in their previous drafts.

For these reasons, the Communist Bloc's Ministry of World Assembly Affairs recommends voting AGAINST the Security Council Resolution under vote "Condemn Lily".

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---For previous Vote Recommendations made by TCB MoWAA, see the TCB MoWAA Vote Recommendations Archive---

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